Here is a link to an example of an observation report. You can use this example to guide your writing.
Try to use as much science vocabulary that you can. E.g. instead of saying ‘sucked up the water’ you could say ‘absorbed the water through the stem’
WALT write an observation report
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Introduction: The first paragraph should introduce what you are going to inform the audience about. e.g. This term we have been learning about plants... | This term we have been learning about plants. |
Procedure: Tell your audience exactly what you did and how you did it. You might use commas to list your actions. You might use words like: when, then, after that... | I need a geranium. plant I need a cup,soil and the plant . First put soil in the container then plant your plant then water it . |
Observations: Tell your audience what you noticed. What were the changes? Why do you think those changes happened? What were some problems? You might use words like: on the first day, noticed, observed, changed... | I have to water the plant everyday The plant seems to be dying. because I didn’t take notice of it . I didn't water the plant and it was dying |
Conclusion: Tell your audience what you learned from the experiment. What were the key things that you found out. Tell your audience how you felt at the end of your experiment. You might use words like: I discovered, I realised, I learned that... | I think the plant needs a big container . and sunlight .I was not interested in looking at the plant everyday . I was not satisfied with my plant because there was NO improvement. |
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