My Narrative - Roald Dahl's Story

One day there was a man called Roald Dahl. He has blue jeans. He has yellow hair. He is a happy man. There was one woman and one man in bed . They were snuggling under the blanket . Then in the morning Roald Dahl pick them up . They were going to the chocolate factory.

 The factory was big like our school. It had a grey roof with different sized chimneys .The chimneys were blowing the smoke out. Then they hopped out from the car. Roald Dahl opened the gate for them. They were excited to go in the factory to go look at the chocolate.

 Roald Dahl was a good man to the people in the factory. There was a man watching the factory. He was Roald Dahl’s friend. He helped him look after the factory. He said “Welcome to the Chocolate Factory.” And they walked inside.

When they got inside they could see a big tube in the chocolate river. They saw chocolate in the river. It looked so nice! Then the people went to go see the tube in the chocolate. The big boy fell in the chocolate. It went splash! Roald Dahl shouted “NO! Don’t go in the chocolate! You will get sucked up in the tube!” But it was too late...The big boy was stuck in the tube. The tube was breaking! Roald Dahl jumped into the chocolate and started to cut the tube. The oompa loompa’s came to help them. Roald Dahl cut the big boy out of the tube. Roald Dahl said “Don’t go back into the chocolate river! It is dangerous.” The big boy said “Ok, I’m sorry.”

 The visitors went home. Roald Dahl was alone. Roald Dahl liked the people and he had a good day at the chocolate factory.